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Friday, 25 May 2018

5 word story

Hi its Toeumu. This week i am posting my 5 word story. if you don't know what 5 word story is, it is when your teacher gives u 5 words to learn and you write any story using those five words in your story. Here is my five word story, enjoy :) Here is a photo.






6 comments:

  1. Kia ora Toeumu,
    I am a Manaiakalani Outreach Facilitator working in schools in Gisborne.
    I'm impressed with the way you have used your five words. The words make a picture in my mind - grimy sand - sounds dirty and nasty. Remember to check your spelling as one of your words is lift not life!
    Mrs Krausse

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    1. Thanks for the advice Mrs krausse! :)

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  2. Hi, Toe'umu my name is Brooklyn and I am a student in Manukau at Waikowhai Primary school. I really like how you tried to use 5 words in story it look's like a real challenge! Maybe in your own time you could write what you found hard and easy. If you would like to visit my class blog it is at http://wpsriceman.blogspot.com/ or my own blog it is wpsbrooklynl.blogspot.com/

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    1. Hi there brooklyn,

      Ok, thanks for the advice.

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  3. Hi my name is Cordell i am in the same school s you and same class.
    like how did a reflection on you work you have done every week.

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