Friday, 25 May 2018

5 word story

Hi its Toeumu. This week i am posting my 5 word story. if you don't know what 5 word story is, it is when your teacher gives u 5 words to learn and you write any story using those five words in your story. Here is my five word story, enjoy :) Here is a photo.


  1. Kia ora Toeumu,
    I am a Manaiakalani Outreach Facilitator working in schools in Gisborne.
    I'm impressed with the way you have used your five words. The words make a picture in my mind - grimy sand - sounds dirty and nasty. Remember to check your spelling as one of your words is lift not life!
    Mrs Krausse

  2. Hi, Toe'umu my name is Brooklyn and I am a student in Manukau at Waikowhai Primary school. I really like how you tried to use 5 words in story it look's like a real challenge! Maybe in your own time you could write what you found hard and easy. If you would like to visit my class blog it is at or my own blog it is

    1. Hi there brooklyn,

      Ok, thanks for the advice.

  3. Hi my name is Cordell i am in the same school s you and same class.
    like how did a reflection on you work you have done every week.